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Re: An Iron Sea pt. 5
The three of them made their way to the front door of the medical center and stepped outside. Sure enough, as the nurse had said, a large group of chest ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: The Demon of the Sea
Hi Master Yoda! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be giving you a review today. I rather liked this piece. For having a 450 word limit, you have done very well. ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Checkmate
Hi iceprincess! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be reviewing your story for today. So, the premise of this is certainly very good. While chess is rather cliche for deep talk ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: Death Comes to Many
Hi there! I'm just popping in to give this story a review. So, I have to say that you introduce some interesting concepts in this story. The Reapers venture close ...
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: An Iron Sea pt. 4
Again, Dr. Claireborne found himself at a loss for words. He could only stare dumbfounded at what lay before him. With slow steps he walked forward. “How did it happen?” ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: Hello everyone!
Hi there Kelly! Welcome to YWS. I'm Conrad Rice, one of the instructors here. You can tell who we are because we have purple names. If you ever have a ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Blossoms of Phnom Pehn
Hi Kylan. Thought I'd stop by and give my two cents on this. It the way sugarcane break under my grip and in the way a betrothed smiles quietly at ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: An Iron Sea pt. 3
Fitful dreams plagued Dr. Claireborne. In one, a naked miniature Buddha chased him around the station on a giant snowmobile. It had a giggly laugh, and it never stopped using ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: Mutts - Passing
Hi Gryphon. Conrad Rice here, to give you a quick review. This was a very nice story. I really liked it. Everything in it flowed very nicely. I noticed a ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: Pretty Polly
Hi Kylan. This is me, dropping in for a quick review. So, you said that you thought I might like this story. And I do. It's a well written piece, ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Are women better writers than men?
I have to agree with Hawkie in that girls might be more inclined to write, which is why there are so many of them on YWS. However, that doesn't make ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
On the Reviews tab of My YWS, it says I have a review from Linx on An Iron Sea pt. 2. Yet when I go there, there is no such ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: An Iron Sea pt. 2
Back down the halls raced Dr. Claireborne. He had no clue what might await him back in the room, how his team might possibly have messed up a simple hypothermia ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Merlin's Downfall
Hi Rosey! Conrad here to give you a review. I thought that this was a rather solid story. Your plot and dialogue are very well constructed, and there are no ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Down by the lake
Hi Kylan! I'm here to give your story a quick review. This has been your most appealing recent story. Your last few ones haven't really pulled at me, minus our ...
Jul 14, 2009
